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Times of India वालों की इंगलिश Off हो गई है क्या? पढ़िए यह न्यूज

टाइम्स आफ इंडिया अखबार में ऐसी अंग्रेजी. पढ़ने वाले सिर पीट रहे हैं. छह अप्रैल को टाइम्स आफ इंडिया की वेबसाइट पर एक खबर प्रकाशित हुई. संभव है यह न्यूज अखबार में छपी हो, संबंधित एडिशन में. इस खबर में अंग्रेजी की इतनी ग्रामेटिकल मिस्टेक हैं कि पाठकों ने अपनी प्रतिक्रिया भी खूब दी है. किसी ने एडिटर की मांकानाका की है तो किसी ने लेखक की. सबने टाइम्स आफ इंडिया वालों को कोसा है कि प्लीज, एडिटिंग और ग्रामर पर ध्यान दिया करें. ये है न्यूज और उसके ठीक नीचे पाठकों के कमेंट.

टाइम्स आफ इंडिया अखबार में ऐसी अंग्रेजी. पढ़ने वाले सिर पीट रहे हैं. छह अप्रैल को टाइम्स आफ इंडिया की वेबसाइट पर एक खबर प्रकाशित हुई. संभव है यह न्यूज अखबार में छपी हो, संबंधित एडिशन में. इस खबर में अंग्रेजी की इतनी ग्रामेटिकल मिस्टेक हैं कि पाठकों ने अपनी प्रतिक्रिया भी खूब दी है. किसी ने एडिटर की मांकानाका की है तो किसी ने लेखक की. सबने टाइम्स आफ इंडिया वालों को कोसा है कि प्लीज, एडिटिंग और ग्रामर पर ध्यान दिया करें. ये है न्यूज और उसके ठीक नीचे पाठकों के कमेंट.

Girl arrested for killing parents
Falguni Banerjee, TNN Apr 6, 2012

CHINSURAH: Police on Wednesday night arrested Mousumi Sarkar, 22, was arrested on Wednesday night for having plotted the murder of her parents along with her fiance. in connection with the murder of her parents. The girl had plotted with her fiance Rippon to kill her parents as they had opposed to their marriage. her desire to marry for killing her parents as they opposed her wish to marry her fiance.

Mousumi was produced in a Chinsurah court on Thursday and sent to her to jail for 14 days of jail custody. The court had earlier turned down her bail plea.

Mousumi was her parents' only child. She wanted to marry Sk Moidul Alam alias Rippon, her classmate at Burdwan Raj College. Her parents did not approve of their relationship. An angry Mousumi thus told Rippon to "teach her parents a lesson".

The youth allegedly hired four goons from Howrah and promised to pay them Rs 30,000 if they killed Mousumi's parents. On the night of March 18, the goons murdered Mousumi's father Mohit Sarkar a retired Army officer and her mother Lata.

Though police immediately arrested Rippon and Rajesh Verma, – an extortionist at the Howrah's Mullickbazar market – they chose not to arrest Mousumi then. They did so only last night.

Special IGP (Burdwan Range) Basab Talukdar said, "Why are you reading so much into one arrest? The objective is to gather evidence so it can stand the test of law in the courts. The aim is to get conviction for all those who are guilty; not who is arrested and who are not . The case is gruesome and is being investigated thoroughly."

Mousumi has given a confessional statement under 164 CrPC to a judicial magistrate. She claimed to have she had merely asked Rippon to teach her parents a lesson and wasn't aware that they would be murdered. However, police say, when her parents were being chopped to death, Mousumi was on the floor above in the same house and did not bother to rescue them.

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EI (USA)
06 Apr, 2012 03:12 AM
Atrocious editing! Just read the first paragraph- it is written like a pre-schooler. Then it continues in the same vein.

abc (Blore) replies to EI
06 Apr, 2012 05:27 AM
Abe Shakespeare ki aulad , is this what you do for timepass? read all articles and comment on the quality and grammatical mistakes rather than the actual story

R9 (USA)
06 Apr, 2012 03:24 AM
Who wrote this article??…a toddler?

Sid (Fremont, U.S) replies to R9
06 Apr, 2012 08:33 AM
Why do you insult toddlers? It was written by a Chimpanzee after Five Large pegs!

Dude (Mumbai) replies to R9
06 Apr, 2012 07:26 AM
The copy-paste apparently got distorted.

Yogesh-Suratwala (Auckland) replies to R9
06 Apr, 2012 05:20 AM
Definitely not your toddler, as your toddler is being looked after by Government agencies. As you and your family are not FIT to raise children.

Praveen (Chennai) replies to Yogesh-Suratwala
06 Apr, 2012 08:43 AM
Dumbo… What she meant by a toddler was because of the grammatical errors. You being in an English speaking country count not identify this??? I pity you!

Yogesh-Suratwala replies to Praveen
06 Apr, 2012 03:15 PM
Listen you C–nt, I know what he mean, it is just that BLACK CATS don't understand.

Sumit (France)
06 Apr, 2012 03:40 AM
I think the editor was shocked!!! 😀 It's a pity that the article is in featuring in this newspaper. Although off-late the newspaper itself has lost its rapport that it used to have!!!

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Mohan (Patiala)
06 Apr, 2012 05:33 AM
I can explain the first para. The journalist was typing various sentences and phrases to see which one was better. When he/she finished the article, it was sent off, along with all the other stuff in the first para. ToI editors obviously did not catch the mistake…after all, there is much more masala news to check nowadays.

Forced to Read TOI (Somewhere)
06 Apr, 2012 07:26 AM
Dear TOI, What happen to quality control, this story has so many grammatical errors that even my 10 year old son wouldn't make. Do you actually proof read this document or just print it? "Mousumi was produced in a Chinsurah court on Thursday and sent??? to her to??? jail for 14 days of jail custody."….. This is even bigger joke sounds like someone is adding stuff cooked up in their own brains rather than facts. Police on Wednesday night arrested Mousumi Sarkar, 22, was arrested on Wednesday night for having plotted the murder of her parents along with her fiance. in connection with the murder of her parents. The girl had plotted with her fiance Rippon to kill her parents as they had opposed to their marriage. her desire to marry for killing her parents as they opposed her wish to marry her fiance.

Prakash (Mumbai (India))
06 Apr, 2012 07:56 AM
What's wrong with TOI????? This article seems to have been compiled by a two year old and proof reading done by a one year old! Surprised at TOI's fall in standards

chetan (bangalore)
06 Apr, 2012 08:13 AM
Am i blind or insane or is there something seriously wrong with the first paragraph. Please clarify. I am shocked.

Ramesh (Bangalore) replies to chetan
06 Apr, 2012 08:55 AM
Editor was in shock when he heard the news, it took him some time to come into senses

Gayathri Devi (Kochi)
06 Apr, 2012 09:00 AM
"Police on Wednesday night arrested Mousumi Sarkar, 22, was arrested on Wednesday night for having plotted the murder of her parents along with her fiance. in connection with the murder of her parents. The girl had plotted with her fiance Rippon to kill her parents as they had opposed to their marriage. her desire to marry for killing her parents as they opposed her wish to marry her fiance."…. next time such events happened inside TOI, at least I won't be surprised.

Ajit (Pune)
06 Apr, 2012 09:05 AM
what a joke of an article..TOI , your quality has dipped rock bottom…can't believe my eyes that you are publishing such a poorly written article.

InstantGenius (Bangalore)
06 Apr, 2012 09:19 AM
TOI editor needs some essay practice. Poorly articulated

Praveen Gupta (Jhumritilaiya) replies to InstantGenius
06 Apr, 2012 10:00 AM
The first paragraph is done by a fourth grader.

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jack (Mumbai)
06 Apr, 2012 09:28 AM
I think TOI is outsourcing its job to some freelance/housewife writers..!!

ME (Chennai)
06 Apr, 2012 10:04 AM
What rubbish english!!!! Whats happening to your standard TOI…

Santosh (Mumbai)
06 Apr, 2012 10:11 AM
to all the english experts, teachers and professors, look at the gruesome murder that has taken place, the parents only daughter, with much pride they got her in to this world, they spent sleepless nights to raise her, the poor father who taught her darling daughter to stand and then walk, the mother who held her to her chest and fed her, did they ever know that their darling daughter would gift them a horrible death, guys feel the pain, to hell with the grammatical mistakes, all children who oppose their parents take a break and look back

BSGuruprakash (Bangalore) replies to Santosh
06 Apr, 2012 04:38 PM
All this is because Just for LUST…Lust…And Lust…. In Lust one will be Confused. lust Brings tension. In lust one wants to grasp and posses. Lust demands. Lust says, " All I want you to have is want I want ". In Lust there is cunningness and manipulation. Lust brings violence. And finally Lust imprisons and destroys.- Sri sri Guruji. All this is because one is Lack of Knowledge about, " why did we only got this Human life with Knowledge ".

amar (Mumbai) replies to Santosh
06 Apr, 2012 10:39 AM
This article was already posted 2 days back..under a different headline..we had enough discussion about that 2 days back..

Santosh replies to amar
06 Apr, 2012 10:56 AM
good, so you feel that this article since it was posted two days back and you posted your comments and read a few, no one else should discuss about it, you are equally or more insensitive than the english language slaves who have voiced their opinions for the language and not for the gruesome act, get some life dude or are you made of plastic?

real (Kolkata)
06 Apr, 2012 10:34 AM
first, this is aweful english! second, why did they have to kill the poor parents??!!!! this wench could have eloped with her lover and got married and in the court…she wouldn't have had to see her parents again anyway 'cause her parents themselves would have loved not to see her face again!…why go for such gruesome options!

rahul (mumbai)
06 Apr, 2012 10:41 AM
why to ready frustrating news in morning.see funny side of news at site satiresofindia

literate (21st century India)
06 Apr, 2012 06:31 PM
TOI, please do a proof reading before publishing the news. Even the very first sentence is not framed correctly. Sad, you are just busy in maximising the volume of news articles and no effort spent on improving the quality of the article.

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